Writing Lesson:
I read this in an old Reader’s Digest and thought it was funny:
How to Write Good
Avoid run-on sentences they are hard to read.
No sentence fragments.
It behooves us to avoid archaisms.
Also, avoid awkward or affected alliteration.
Don’t use no double negetives.
If I’ve told you once, I’ve told you a thousand times: Resist hyperbole.
Avoid commas, that are not necessary.
Verbs has to agree with their subjects.
Avoid trendy locutions that sound flaky.
Writing carefully, dangling participles should not be used.
Kill all exclamation points!!!
Never use a long word when a diminutive one will do.
Proofread carefully to see if you any words out.
Take the bull by the hand, and don’t mix metaphors.
Don’t verb nouns.
Never, ever use repetitive redundancies.
Las but not least, avoid cliches like the plague.
Okay, maybe this is not interesting to some of you, but I got a chuckle out of it.
and Thoughts. . . . . . .
I spent some time today w/Karen. It was nice to visit with a friend. We talked a little bit about eating organically. Do any of you have any suggestions or comments about healthy food choices? Recipes? I made a recipe using bulger (whole grain wheat) last week and it was good. It was basically a pilaf, you saute mushrooms and green onions in some butter, add the bulger and some water, cover it and bake it in the oven. It had a nice, nutty, earthy taste to it.
I feel a pull to slow down and get back to a basic lifestyle. I want to focus on my relationship with the Lord, family and friends, to love my neighbors and my church family, to enjoy God’s creation, to eat and drink in a more healthy way, to re-discover the meanings of holidays, to teach my children how to be creative without plugging something in or replacing batteries. I love to read, I love quiet, and I love the simple things in life.

Waves hello! I like your name, I’m a fan of anything purple! π
Our family is starting to eat more natural no processed and trying to go for all organic foods, but I have found it can’t happen overnight. But we are getting there, meal by meal. It is a choice with each meal what we are going to prepare and eat- and sometimes a struggle because throwing in a frozen pizza sure is easier than preparing a meal for half the afternoon! I am so not supermom. lol Tonight we are trying a new dish: Spinach and Sun-Dried tomato pasta- if its good I’ll post the recipe for it on my blog tomorrow. LOL Live Simply is a beautiful motto and one that our family tries to live by… Good luck!
I too am feeling that pull to get back to basic lifestyle. My husband and I are praying about building a farm on 38 acres that my step Dad has offered to sell us. I long for our children to run and play in the fields and streams. To be able to walk in the fields and just talk to the Lord What a peaceful thought.
Have a relaxing weekend
Michelle
I love the “How to Write Good” excerpt. The writer in me got a good laugh about that. I’m glad you had a nice with Karen. She’s so sweet and so easy to talk to. Will you be at the softball game in a little while?
Me too (to the last statement)! I like the “How to write” tips also. They are so true!